Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Essay #3


Sit. Stay. Play Dead.
Dogs have always been a huge part of my life.  I grew up with them and now have two of my own.  Recently, I became more interested in shelters and the whole idea behind them.  After adopting a puppy from the shelter and a puppy from a rescue in Detroit, my desire to know more began to grow.  All this led me to what topic I want to write my comparison essay about.  I am going to show the different views between kill animal shelters and no-kill animal shelters.  I’ll use these different views on over population, treatment of unwanted animals, and animal rights to support my opinion that all animal shelters should establish a no-kill policy.   

4 comments:

  1. Great topic. You should be able to find plenty of information on both types of shelters to make your comparison.

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  2. Maybe instead of describing how you got to this point in your summary, you could do that in your final essay. I would have liked to hear more about what would be in your essay, but from what I have read, your essay sounds very interesting.

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  3. This is really cool, I would definitely like to hear the statistics comparing kill and non-kill shelters. I wonder how non-kill shelters contain so many, and what happens when they do get too many to handle.

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  4. Interesting topic! Make sure you are not making your research paper into a persuasive paper by telling more factual information than trying to get someone into doing something.

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